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2016-2018三年高考英语分项解析--开放式
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  【2018•全国I】假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括:

  (1).到达时间;

  (2).合适的礼物;

  【参考范文】

  Dear Terry,

  How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.

  Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.

  If you have any other problems, please don't hesitate to contact me.

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  点睛:本文虽然看起来比较容易,但学生真正动起笔来,还是比较困惑的。原因为:1.看起来中国餐桌礼仪很熟悉,但内容很多,一时间不知道该写什么;2.100单词左右,写出到达时间;合适的礼物;餐桌礼仪三个内容,信息量大,选择有困难;

  应对方法:近年来高考写作的命题常用的思想就是高起点低落点。高起点题目很高,中国文化,中国故事,中国礼仪等等,但最终都把它们落在应用文的框架里,这就是低落点。写这样的作文,一定要注意不能写过于具体的内容,要找最重要的,最熟悉的写,不要面面俱到,中国餐桌礼仪内容太多,100单词无法写。找重点,以点带面。但选择重要内容本身就是一种能力。

  【2018•全国II】你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together,内容包括:

  (1)短片内容:学校的发展;

  (2)放映时间、地点;

  (3)欢迎对短片提出意见。

  注意:

  (1)词数100左右;

  (2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

  【参考范文】

  Notice

  In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.

  To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What's more, every one of you will be welcome to enjoy the movie, have a heated discussion afterwards and give your own comments.

  Student Union

  June 8, 2018

  【2018•浙江】写作

  第一节 应用文写作

  66. 假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:

  (1). 口语能力:

  (2). 相关经验;

  (3). 应聘目的。

  注意:

  (1). 词数80左右;

  (2). 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

  【参考范文】

  Dear Sir/Madam,

  I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Hearing that some volunteers are wanted to welcome the foreign students, I am gladly writing to apply for this job.

  I do believe that I am very qualified for this voluntary work. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, I have a good knowledge of English and I can communicate with native English speakers fluently. Secondly, I have some experience in accompanying foreign friends.

  I do believe the volunteer work will enable me to practise English more fluently and broaden my horizons.

  Looking forward to your early reply!

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,本文时态应以现在时为主,人称为第一人称。

  第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

  2017年高考题

  [2017•全国卷Ⅰ]

  假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:

  1. 时间和地点;

  2. 内容:学习唐诗;

  3. 课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。

  注意:1.词数100左右;

  2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

  【参考范文】

  Dear Leslie,

  I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.

  Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.

  Best wishes.

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  [2017•全国卷Ⅱ]

  假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper¬cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:

  1.展览时间、地点;

  2.展览内容。

  注意:1.词数100左右;

  2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

  【参考范文】

  Dear Henry,

  I'm Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you're interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms—paper¬cutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.

  It'll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9:00 am to 7:00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2:00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like.

  You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which paper¬cutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of paper¬cuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting.

  Looking forward to your early reply.

  Regards,

  Li Hua

  [2017•全国卷Ⅲ]

  假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:

  1.球队活动;

  2.报名方式及截止日期。

  注意:1.词数100左右;

  2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

  ________________________________________________________________________

  ________________________________________________________________________

  ________________________________________________________________________

  ________________________________________________________________________

  【参考范文】

  Dear Eric,

  I was informed that our school Ping¬pong Team is looking for new members among us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially ping¬pong.

  As you know, playing ping¬pong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.

  Would you like to join? If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time this Saturday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.

  Looking forward to your early reply.

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  2016年高考题

  1. 【2016•全国新课标I】书面表达(满分25分)

  假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)

  注意:

  1. 词数100左右;

  2. 可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。

  【答案】

  Dear Ms Jenkins,

  I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.

  In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my application and resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.

  Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  【解析】

  【名师点睛】 本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确,要点全面,语言通顺流畅,很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的,然后具体讲述自己的困难,再提出请求,最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外,作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience,、现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help、宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮点所在。

  2.【2016•全国新课标II】书面表达(满分25分)

  假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括:

  1.主题:环境保护;

  2.展览时间;

  3.投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.

  注意:

  1.词数100左右;

  2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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