2016-2018三年高考英语分项解析--文字提纲式
作者: 发布时间:2018-08-08 08:40:54 本文来源于:
  

  【2018•天津卷】书面表达(满分25分)

  61. 假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他普在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。

  (1)比赛的时间、地点;

  (2)邀请他的原因;

  (3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。

  注意:(1)词数不少于100;

  (2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;

  (3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

  参考词汇:

  世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition

  Dear Chris,

  I have good news to tell you. ______________________________________________________________

  ____________________________________________________________________________________________

  ____________________________________________________________________________________________

  ____________________________________________________________________________________________

  __________________________________________________________________________

  I’m looking forward to your reply.

  Yours,

  Li Jin

  【参考范文】

  Dear Chris,

  I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July so as to promote the development of robotics.

  What I would like to stress is that it is looking for new members at this moment. I would like to invite you to take part in it, since I know you've just won first prize in the Robotics competition held in your institute and have shown great talent in designing robotics. Therefore, you are the most suitable person, I suppose.

  The training schedule, in addition to regular training, includes joining in a variety of activities, such as participating in some national competitions. I will send its details to you by e-mail. I would appreciate it if you give us some advice on how to make it perfect.

  I'm looking forward to your reply.

  Yours,

  Li Jin

  【点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误,看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句,当然,没有把握的句子不要写。

  【2018•北京】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:

  (1) 表示欢迎;

  (2) 推荐他上哪所大学;

  (3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。

  注意:(1). 词数不少于50;

  (2). 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

  Dear Jim,

  ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

  ____________________________________________________________________________________________

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  【答案】Dear Jim,

  I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.

  Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.

  I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  亮点说明:文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子结构紧凑。

  使用定语从句Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美;巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备,使句子结构对称。

  【2018•全国III】假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:

  1. 学校的体育场馆;

  2. 主要的运动项目;

  3. 你喜欢的项目。

  注意:1. 词数100左右:

  2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

  ____________________________________________________________________________________________

  ____________________________________________________________________________________________

  ____________________________________________________________________________________________

  ____________________________________________________________________________________________

  ____________________________________________________________________________________________

  __________________________________________________________

  【答案】Dear Peter,

  I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.

  To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.

  All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  【解析】本题作文为提纲式作文,形式依然是书信,即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况,属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际,学生并不陌生,有话可说。

  2017高考题

  【2017•天津卷】书面表达(满分25分)

  假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。

  (1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;

  (2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);

  (3)希望她有机会重访天津。

  注意:

  (1)词数不少于100;

  (2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;

  (3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。

  参考词汇:第十三届全运会 the 13th National Games

  Dear Mrs. Green,

  I’m glad to hear from you. ______________________________________________________________

  ________________________________________________________________________________________

  ________________________________________________________________________________________

  Yours,

  Li Jin

  【答案】略

  【考点定位】考查提纲作文

  【名师点睛】这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。根据要求确定要点,适当对要点进行发挥。关键在于词汇和句式的选用,尽量使用简洁准确的语言。

  【2017•北京卷】你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:

  1.你建议的线路;

  2.你的理由;

  3.你的祝愿。

  注意:1.词数不少于50;

  2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

  Dear Jim,

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  【答案】

  Dear Jim,

  I’m happy receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.

  Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the your along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.

  Hope you’ll have a good time in China.

  Yours

  Li Hua

  【亮点说明】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。表语从句的使用:That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.高级词汇的使用:highly recommended。连接词的合理使用:Personally,moreover。

  【2017•浙江卷6月考】

  应用文写作(满分15分)

  假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:

  1. 参加者;

  2. 时间、地点;

  3. 活动:登山、野餐等。

  注意:1. 词数80左右;

  2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

  ________________________________________________________________________

  ________________________________________________________________________

  【参考范文】

  Dear Chris,

  How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7:00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.

  Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you don't have spare time for this trip, it is fine. It's just up to you.

  Looking forward to hearing from you.

  Yours,

  Li Hua

[《高中生》杂志·新高考网 责任编辑:周丹]

关于我们 - 关于《高中生》杂志社 - 联系我们 - 编辑热线 - 投稿

copyright 2010-2016 中共湖南省委宣传部、湖南省教育厅主管,湖南教育报刊集团主办,《高中生》杂志社承办
ALL Rights Reserved

互联网出版许可证:新出版网证(湘)字017号 湘ICP备10000103号